lilchrissi

A favorite of mine from Lissy. Orange background, image of two women close to kissing as the center photo with the entry overlapping.
I don't like how you have the last 5 directly on the template. It causes scroll within scroll, which is annoying for a lot of people. You should keep those under the entry, or try not having a space between them. Or maybe raise the links section to be parallel with the top of the picture.
Also that stupid thing in the top left corner annoys me and takes away from the beauty of the template. Can't you throw that under a links page or something?

Your guestbook doesn't match at all.

Links/Organization 10/10:

It's organised, links to the right of the entry. I like how you did the archive page, with the older pages in the top left corner, that looks good there and cleans up the entry page.

Contact 5/5:

AIM, tagboard, Emotion Map. You should probably throw the Email, Notes, and Guestbook under Contacts on your template, would make much more sense there.

Errors 9/10:

I looked really hard, couldn't find any.

Going backwards, starting with this entry, your previous and next links don't work.

Updates 5/5:

Plenty of multiples. Not as much as me, but not everyone can be pathetic.

Content 30/30:

Your diary is fucking amazing. I love when I get to review adult diaries, they are so refreshing. You not only write with a ton of emotion, you go above and beyond in every entry, even if it's a short one.

Your stories are amazing, sadly they are true, but very well written. Please keep me informed how your book is going, I'd love to purchase it.

I didn't see anything wrong with grammar, spelling, punctuation. Once in a while some paragraphs could've been broken up, but it was still a great read. You show a strength in your words, in your life. I can't believe I spent as much time at your diary as I did. This cracked me up. I woke up my sister laughing so hard.

Bonus 10/10:

101, Autobiography (which was the first entry I read, and it kicked ass), Cast, Rings, Poetry, Links, Emotion Map, Tag, probably more.

Will I Return? 10/10:

I need to stop doing these fucking reviews, I'm going to fill yet another diary with favorites if I don't stop soon. Adding you to my favorites under my poetry diary, since I maxed out my regular one.

Total Score: 97/100, welcome to The Amazing.

Additional Comments/Questions :

I used to pride myself at having the most thorough reviews done in the shortest amount of time. But because your diary was that good, I spent two days going through it before posting this review. Amazing, really.

You didn't need to kiss any ass in your request, your diary is near perfection. Anyone that says otherwise, send them to me.

So says Lioness.